(09-03-2020, 09:39 AM)Greg Wrote: But it's just not me without complaints.
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Can you resolve this by going soft on your chronology? I get that chronological is the logical organization path, especially as you compile your story, but for dramatic effect, you could break that up in your final draft. Think Memento. I also think it's valid to confess that you were so scattered during this period that your memories are jumbled. If handled well, that could also add drama. Those short jobs are worth mention, but if there's no story, just mention them and get on with it. No reason to dwell where there's no tale to tell.
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