04-23-2017, 01:37 PM
Episodes 4 and 5: The Dumbness continues.
I'm thinking the went through the cliche handbook for writers for these plots. Ooh, it's all about stopping the synthetic heroin. Who knew my conglomerate participated in evil! And could we do stuff, rather than just sitting around talking about stuff? That old 'show not tell' bugaboo you get in scriptwriting 101
And the dumbness. You would think Danny would know how a meeting works. He's not some coyote cub they rescued from the Jungle. He does mention he knows how celebrity works at one point.
And stop wearing the white sneakers with the suit. What is it about the feet that you can't worry about the shoes.
And there was the axe gang attack. The axe gang! Sorry, hatchets. They even did the slo-mo axe flying within inches of the face shot. But at least there was a little bit of action.
Finally, we start the romance between Colleen and Danny. Oh, god is this terrible. They have the chemistry a rock would have with a guppy. They almost said with great power comes great responsibility, except it had to do with money. Hey, if something bad is happening at a wharf you own why not just show up with your security guards and a large crew rather than sneaking up on it with you and your new GF? Yes, Danny gave some lame excuse why they couldn't, but the key word in there was lame.
I don't know if I can watch anymore.
I'm thinking the went through the cliche handbook for writers for these plots. Ooh, it's all about stopping the synthetic heroin. Who knew my conglomerate participated in evil! And could we do stuff, rather than just sitting around talking about stuff? That old 'show not tell' bugaboo you get in scriptwriting 101
And the dumbness. You would think Danny would know how a meeting works. He's not some coyote cub they rescued from the Jungle. He does mention he knows how celebrity works at one point.
And stop wearing the white sneakers with the suit. What is it about the feet that you can't worry about the shoes.
And there was the axe gang attack. The axe gang! Sorry, hatchets. They even did the slo-mo axe flying within inches of the face shot. But at least there was a little bit of action.
Finally, we start the romance between Colleen and Danny. Oh, god is this terrible. They have the chemistry a rock would have with a guppy. They almost said with great power comes great responsibility, except it had to do with money. Hey, if something bad is happening at a wharf you own why not just show up with your security guards and a large crew rather than sneaking up on it with you and your new GF? Yes, Danny gave some lame excuse why they couldn't, but the key word in there was lame.
I don't know if I can watch anymore.
As a matter of fact, my anger does keep me warm