10-03-2012, 01:30 PM
Last Crane
Of course, the Chinese Steampunk story. My favorite image was the octopus on top of the pagoda eating the patrons as they fled. Again, nice sense of atmosphere. I really like the tone of Cranefly stories. I liked the characterization of everyone in the flying crane.There was a very vivid sense of place, even if the place was strikingly odd. The story did have an arc which I appreciated. I would like to see more of this world and the people in it.
I do not have a prosthetic. Although I probably walk like I do.
One point of confusion for me was whether our hero was completely mechanical. I came to this conclusion because he turned the wind-up key in his chest . . .
Should it be 'baubles' rather than 'bauble' on page 5?
Of course, the Chinese Steampunk story. My favorite image was the octopus on top of the pagoda eating the patrons as they fled. Again, nice sense of atmosphere. I really like the tone of Cranefly stories. I liked the characterization of everyone in the flying crane.There was a very vivid sense of place, even if the place was strikingly odd. The story did have an arc which I appreciated. I would like to see more of this world and the people in it.
I do not have a prosthetic. Although I probably walk like I do.
One point of confusion for me was whether our hero was completely mechanical. I came to this conclusion because he turned the wind-up key in his chest . . .
Should it be 'baubles' rather than 'bauble' on page 5?
So much for the flickr badge idea. Dammit