09-20-2012, 06:46 AM
The story had a great sense of atmosphere and tone. I love Cranefly's use of language but at time's it is a little overpowering.
I was surprised by the abruptness of the ending. I wanted more from the story. I guess i can extrapolate how it will play out but it seems like there should have been more.
All and all, it was a nice way to start the day reading your story.
I was surprised by the abruptness of the ending. I wanted more from the story. I guess i can extrapolate how it will play out but it seems like there should have been more.
All and all, it was a nice way to start the day reading your story.
So much for the flickr badge idea. Dammit