04-24-2020, 09:19 AM
(This post was last modified: 04-24-2020, 09:22 AM by Drunk Monk.)
Of course! Happy to proof your stuff.
I'm viewing it on a Surface Pro which is a hybrid tablet laptop so that explains it.
You might also consider alphabetizing that gallery if possible at this stage. I have to do that all the time with my publications for political reasons. Kung Fu masters can get catty when their rivals are ahead of them for no reason, and the last thing I want is to have to herd catty masters. But if fencers don't care about guard size, they might not care about presentation order.
Is there a link to The Last Captain somewhere? That doesn't need to be prominent - it shouldn't be - but it should be somewhere but I didn't see it.
Overall, it's strong. Simple and to the point (not witzelsucht comment, dammit). It does exactly what you need it to do. I was skeptical about your banners but now seeing them in context, they work quite well. Nice work.
I'm viewing it on a Surface Pro which is a hybrid tablet laptop so that explains it.
You might also consider alphabetizing that gallery if possible at this stage. I have to do that all the time with my publications for political reasons. Kung Fu masters can get catty when their rivals are ahead of them for no reason, and the last thing I want is to have to herd catty masters. But if fencers don't care about guard size, they might not care about presentation order.
Is there a link to The Last Captain somewhere? That doesn't need to be prominent - it shouldn't be - but it should be somewhere but I didn't see it.
Overall, it's strong. Simple and to the point (not witzelsucht comment, dammit). It does exactly what you need it to do. I was skeptical about your banners but now seeing them in context, they work quite well. Nice work.
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